Good. Check your grammar lease. Please format your proposal and upload the latest one.

I'd suggest you to look at the sample of appropriate proposal format by http://uhl2322a14group7.wikispaces.com/. Although this group still need to polish the current version, it is the best so far.

You might also want to see how your friends from the other section deal with their proposal. These two are awesome although they need to polish the version. But I still think that they can be good samples for you! http://uhl2322a15group2.wikispaces.com/ and http://uhl2322a15group11.wikispaces.com/